Rewrites and sketches
Scribbling lots of notes today for a total rewrite of Chapter Two. The first two chapters were written long before I made the commitment to try to draw the book as a comic book, and not something more journal-like in the vein of, for example, Maira Kalman's The Principles of Uncertainty. Once I overhaul this chapter, I'm hoping the next few chapters of thumbnails, drawn in the company of other cartoonists, will be a lot less work to rewrite.
Speaking of other cartoonists, the more I meet, the more I remark that as a group, they are the friendliest and most supportive people I have ever met. Go comics!