Late Afternoon Swimming

The best light for drawing from memory is maybe late afternoon sun, the kind that burns the image really good onto your retina.


Not from observation

That's better. Here's another penciled page from the next chapter, which so far is looking nicer than the last.


Finding a balance

My cartooning mind is at odds with my drawing from observation mind, and the two need to learn to play together. In the meantime, I space word balloons.